So... I have a bunch of problems with putting this up. That usually means it will get lots of hits.
My main problem is that John Fardell did the hard work with the visuals. Usually, when I do my copyright infringement, the comic that I use lacks a strong narrative. But Fardell is a master of story-telling, and once I knew what my theme would be, it was too easy to write. The images drew out the story.